Thursday, September 19, 2019

 ANZAC  DAY  
 I  heard  gunshots  and rockets  launching.
I  saw  people  running from  the war.


I  saw   people  charging   with their  knives and then  they died.
I felt   sad.  

 i   wondered  if they are  ok.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 17, 2019 at 12:26 PM

    hi Ashdyn,
    I really like your work because you have put lots of effort into it.
    You did a really good job.

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  2. AnonymousMay 19, 2020 at 10:06 AM

    Thx Liam

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  3. AnonymousJune 5, 2020 at 12:16 PM

    apriciate the support

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