Thursday, August 8, 2019

winter poetry


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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 10:11 AM

    I like your work

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  2. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 10:28 AM

    cool work Ashdyn

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  3. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 10:31 AM

    i like my work

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  4. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 11:53 AM

    your work it is so so so so cool .

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  5. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 12:16 PM

    kia ora ashdyn i really like your work you put a lot of mahi in to it. it is Amazing and Awsome by bahlee.

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  6. AnonymousAugust 23, 2019 at 9:15 AM

    Hi Ashdyn your work is so so so so so amazing

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  7. AnonymousAugust 23, 2019 at 9:20 AM

    kia ora ashdyn i really like your work

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  8. Room 3 @ RiverdaleAugust 28, 2019 at 6:23 PM

    Kia ora Ashdyn,
    You've made a great start to your work. It looks really interesting. I enjoyed the mention of hot cocoa... that's one of my favourite parts about winter too. Next, maybe you could finish off your learning so that we can read your poem.
    Kōka Amie

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  9. AnonymousOctober 22, 2019 at 9:32 AM

    Hi my name is Jayde I go to papakura central school I like how you did your writing .

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